Has itch fixed their payment fiasco? I liked buying my NSFW games on itch because they seemed to have less barriers about content then Steam or Patreon, but then they messed with the payments to creators and now I don't know who to support.
I will say another reason I prefer buying my NSFW games on itch is they are separate from Steam and I don't have to worry about accidentally announcing my cuckold fetish to all my friends if I forget to go offline.
Hello once again,
Love this game and all the progress I've seen on it. I know you're in crunch time to try and finish this thing up so just wanted to add my two cents before that happens.
This is a weird ask so feel free to disregard. One of the things that really drew me to this game, (besides the content and great 3D animations) was the fact the this couple actually seemed to love each other, and every step they took into Femdom, with a little manipulation from Zoey and her friend, brought the couple closer and into sexual situations they both eventually loved. I say this because that's how I always read the dialogue.
With the AI voice, it adds a coldness and a little disdain to each of the lines, especially the "anything else?" line. I can only hear the barely hidden disdain and impatience when she says it. If nothing else, please rerecord that line to change the inflection a little bit. I guess what I'm asking is could you inject human warmth into a cold robotic AI voice? Which I know is clearly a paradox, but please keep in mind. In the mean time I'll probably just continue to not use the AI voice, but that's just me.
Also in the first wedding planning restaurant scene, wedding invitation needs to be pluralized. Another one of those un-ignorable grammar errors, that made it into the voice script.
Thanks again, love the game
First of all, love the game and appreciate all the hard work going into it.
Second, I’m super excited for the new content and would prefer you work on that.
Baring that I have a few suggestions on the cuckolding progression in the game. I know you have a ‘how involved MC is’ progression, but it feels a little jilted to me with how the scenes are set up in game.
When you have the first talk, after getting caught watching porn, Zoe asks if this is something you want to do. If you are kind of on board she immediately gets you to confirm and then commits to doing it. Which feels like locking the player into something they may just like the idea of. (As many cucks do). I suggest, after she asks you the first time, Zoe says maybe she’s interested too. Then when she goes out on one of her girls night she could come back and say she met/flirted/danced with a guy but didn’t go any further. Then she could ask again and say are you sure you want to do this? Feels like it gives MC a chance to realize this could really happen now. If he says no then, she could still use teasing dialog elsewhere (i.e. watching TV where she comments on other guys and their dicks) without actually going through with it.
After that, I would suggest moving the first time you catch Zoe at home with Jeff to be the next cuckolding scene. The MC still seems hesitant until she fully convinces you by edging you. Which felt weird to me after her already going out, committing the act and forcing you down to the floor to eat the creampie. On that note, you could then use her coming home after cucking you as a repeatable scene which could happen by chance when she goes out. This also gives the nights she goes out extra excitement because you never know what she will do, and I don’t think any other events happen when she goes out? Seems like a wasted night whenever it happens.
Also a small thing that bothers me more than it should. At the start of a new game when Zoe prompts you to go to the restaurant for the first time she says “You remember that we had planned a restaurant tonight?” Should be either “we had planned to go to a restaurant tonight” or “we had planned a restaurant date tonight”. It stands out because the rest of the writing is really good.
Sorry for the block of text, I now how hard even simple changes are and how often you get bombarded with suggestions. I honestly just love this game and think about it probably more than I should. Feel free to disregard.
Thanks
